I went to siam water park with jay,Marlon,Nozomu and me.
On monday i went to siam water park with jay,Marlon and Nozomu, It was around 10:30am when we arrived at the water park, I asked if any one liked rollercoasters and they all said "no!" so i thought to my self " this is going to be very boring." but i was wrong so this is what happend.
The first ride we went in was called viking, me and Marlon already went on this ride the year before so we sat at the back because the back was the scariest place to sit and my mum decided to sit with us
it was quiet scary but we liked it so we tried it again but my mum didn't want to do it because she thought it was to scary. After we did that ride Marlon told us there were a lot of cool shops in siam park so we walk to where the stores were and we bought slime (the slime was literally called the fartmacker) because when you put your finger in the slime it would make a farting sound. After that we saw a ride called the spider ride so we went on it, What this ride would do was it would spin while going up and down jay and Nozumu liked it very much but me and Marlon thought it was pretty boring. Then we remembered that we told Karan that we were going to siam water park and he said that the ride he liked the most was a water slide (i think it was called THE DROP) It sounded fun so we went to the water park section. After we were done changing we went to find THE DROP, After around 5minutes we found the water slide we went on it ones and it was very fun. Jay thought of doing a tournament we all thought it was a good idea so we started. Marlon and me were first then Nozumo and Jay and the people who win. Marlon won me and Jay won Nozumu so Marlon and Jay went against each other and the final winer was Marlon we did that ride around 15 to 20 times. We were kinda hungry so we went to the food land. We found a place called Crazy Pizza it sounded good so we went to eat there. I ordered hot dog with chicken nuggets Nozomu ordered hot dog with french fries Jay ordered pizza with french fries and Marlon ordered the same thing as Nozumo hot dog with french fries. As we were eating the power went of we asked the people "how long till it comes back?" they said "around one hour." We were all angry and there was nothing there we could do because all the rides were powered with electricity. So we asked my mum if we could go back home and she said "yes". when we went home everybody stayed at my house we played and at around 3:00 they all went home.
good story would like more inner thoughts and details
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ReplyDeleteThis is much much better - good effort Manu!
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